As noted on the submission, there's an alternative version of the seventh short story available on my AO3 account, a more detailed one.
I haven't posted it here as it's explicit enough to warrant raising my content rating, which I really don't want to do. It may be detailed, but it's not - I certainly hope it's not - pornographic, and I worry that distinction will be missed. Beyond that, I'd be opening myself up to seeing real porn, and I really, really don't want that. AO3 is the only site I post to with the freedom and choice to hopefully make that distinction, so it's the only one to get the alternative version.
I have a personal preference of the two versions, but label neither as the 'definitive' one. It's all up to the reader.